Hometown Excerpt #6 – FBI Report


A short one today, but fairly important, and not just for the information it imparts.

When I wrote the first draft of Hometown, I wasn’t far out of high school myself, and I wrote entirely from the point of view of our Teen Heroes. It was the story of how the Kids Who Didn’t Fit In – the smart kids, the nerds, the artists – saved the day and broke free of their hometown.

That was the story I needed to tell at that age: the heroic Outsiders breaking free and going on to greatness. After losing a few along the way, of course; it was a horror story.

There was a lot of truth in that story: young love, young courage, young dreams; the grinding despair of living in a dying town, the desperate need to get out, and the ever-present danger of being trapped. That’s why it’s still the meat of the book.

Even so, it was a limited point of view. A young point of view.

When I came back to Hometown almost ten years later, I had a different perspective.  I had a better understanding of what awaited our heroes when they went on to their Glorious Future, and how the prices they paid would affect them in the long run – thus the future narrator, piecing together the fragments of that terrible Fall, trying to make sense of something that scarred their past.

I also have an understanding of what it means to not be the protagonist.  When you’re a teenager, you’re always at the center of the drama of your own life.  As an adult, the story is usually going on far away from you, and you can do nothing but send a few bucks.  At best.

Perhaps most importantly, I have a slightly better idea what it means to lose someone along the way.

This post (which I now realize is about the same length as this intro) is the first sign that the events of Belford’s terrible Fall reach beyond the protagonists and the victims, that they have an impact on the larger world, as they undoubtedly would.

As always, please check out the rest of Hometown here, and the rest of my library here (new story soon!  Keep watching!).

Now, on to Hometown.



From “The Belford Incident”, an FBI internal report dated October 8, 1997)

To the best of our knowledge, the first death connected to the Belford Incident was Lila Ann Benson: female, Caucasian, daughter of Lyle and Audrey Benson, aged sixteen at time of death.

Victim was last seen alive on August 19, 1994, leaving for a date with Jeremy Lawrence Zerschmitt, Caucasian male, also aged sixteen. His car was found the following day by local high school students. It had been both concealed and vandalized, and blood spatter indicated that the attack had taken place within one meter of the driver’s-side door (see Appendix I for crime scene photos). Victim’s body was found on August 22 in the woods to the North of Black Lake, approximately one-quarter of one mile from the crime scene.

Victim’s wounds indicate that she attempted to struggle. Defensive wounds were extensive, with hands and arms apparently removed in progressive chunks. It is these wounds that led to the conclusion that J. Zerschmitt was to be treated as a potential additional victim instead of a suspect; bones were not sawed or hacked but severed with powerful singular blows, of which Zerschmitt was not capable. Wounds were consistent with a curved, extremely sharp object such as a scythe or sickle (see Appendix I for photos and analysis of victim’s wounds, with particular attention to the wounds to the throat and abdomen).  

Semen was found in the victim’s vaginal tract, but this was determined to belong to J. Zerschmitt, with all indications being that they had consensual intercourse before the attack. No other signs of sexual assault.

Oddly, despite being disemboweled, dismembered and left in the woods for several days in late summer, Victim’s body was untouched by scavengers or insects. Body was tested for chemicals that might have repelled or poisoned such creatures, but none were found.

J. Zerschmitt’s Missing Persons case remained open until January 13, 1996, long after the Belford Incident had ended, when an ice fisherman on Black Lake snagged his remains. His body was heavily decomposed, but he was clearly a victim of an animal attack instead of a homicide, as per Benson. His wounds do not match the bite or claw patterns of any known large animal, though they do match those found on several other Belford Incident victims.


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